Erase My Life As You Erase My Pain

by Tricky Daze   Jan 13, 2007


Sometimes i feel like i can erase
All the things that i learned
All the things that i lived
And i wish i had a pencil
To draw my life again

As i draw a picture
A picture of sadness
What colors are included in?
What shapes you see?

A love maybe,a heart in black
That heart won't stop to ache
Nothing in my childhood
Nothing in my past
Can erase this disappointment
Can erase this shadow black

Looking at my window
All colors faded black
Not any of my parents
Not any of my friends
Can make my life bearable
Can make white that black

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jeffreys Girl

    THAT WAS THE MOST AMAZING POEM IVE READ IN A WHILE.. KEEP IT UP 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jeffreys Girl

    This is one of the most AMAZING

  • 16 years ago

    by ForbiddenSnowflake

    Awesome poem. I can relate to it so much. Keep up the good work!!!

    Bridget

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxiee An

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  • 17 years ago

    by cory

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