This poem is so sad n really moving i can relate to the lines:

And i wish i had a pencil
And draw my life again

i think these were very deep, well done

Great job!

Awesome job!! So well done!!! I love this poem... and I can connect w/ it!! Thanx for the comment on my poem! 5/5!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

This was very well done, beautifully written, and seems to come from the heart. what more could the perfect poem have? thx so much for the comment on my poem. meant a lot to me! keep writing chica!

Love deep poems and they don;t get
deeper then this,5/5

5! i really liked this one

5/5 you have some real talent ^^

This was really sad, i liked the flow and the rhyme scheme.
a lovely poem, well done
love Tara-Kay
xxxx

Very nicely written. I loved it. The flow as well as the structure was good.

This line,"And draw my life again" would make you poem flow better if you said it this way, "To draw my life again" Other than that, amazing poem.

Peace, Joe

I enjoyed this, very good keep it up =)

Hmm this poem is odd in my oppion...but overall i think its pretty good...but mayb im translating wrong but you cant erase your own pain...you have to heal it.....well a 5/5 for me

This was amazing and beautiful. You showed a lot of talent in this, keep the poems coming! 5/5

~jas~

'Nothing in my childhood
Nothing in my past
Can erase this disappointment
Can erase this shadow black'

My favorite part.
I loved this whole poem..
But, that part just, it had meaning to me, I guess. Lol.
You did a great job on this one.
My favorite so far.

This poem is my favorite by you, its dark and has some very interesting points, if you could draw your life in just one picture what would it be and what colors would you use, I never thought of it before 5/5

This was beautiful!
So very sad, yet such a pleasure to read.
You did a fantastic job with the imagery and wording.
I think you did a wonderful job on this.

Awww this is very sad, but i enjoyed reading it very much. although in some spots in didnt flow all the way through it was still did. and i loved the idea about the poem. wonderful job! 5/5

~Kristina

Wow. Incredible metaphor for depression. Great write, nice imagery.
5/5
~Stephen White

Oh my god..this poem is great 5/5 keep it up..i really liked it.

Ohh dat was so nice 5/5

Very very sad!
its like this person didnt have a nice life since childhood and its very emotional...

keep it up