Now I think this is your BEST POEM ever! I loved how you wrote it! I cannot begin to look for a favorite stanza. They are all amazing! I'm going to give you a 5 out of 5. AMAZING WORK!! |
by amoxi
I liked this one the best so far ur a really good writer keep it up |
by Bryan
Very good poem laura, just make sure you capitalize the i's in every sentence, but other than that this is perfect, 5/5!!!! keep it up!!! |
by ryeann
OMG i got the chills when i read this !! it was soo great, good job!! |
Great poem, but the flow got a little rough in some spots. Great job though! |
by Daisha
This was really moving. I loved it! |
by beth
The last lines are genius, love it. |
Wow I really love the ending, nicely written doll! |
by Esther
Wow-excellent poem...very meaningful, you totally show your emotions. |
by Anonymous
Wow this is a good poem. I'm especially impressed because English is not your native language =) Keep up the good work. |
by Woe
LOOOOVE IT! |
by Mihaela
Congratulation!!What a great poem!!Keep on the good work.Take care of you!!Best regards,Michelle xxx |
Wow what an imagery! Its really cool Daze. I cherished this piece. TC |
by tears i cry
Sad yet inspirational |
by Adelle
This poem was very moving a very enjoyable read I liked your choice of words. |
I really like this poem. It was different; i like different. I loved the repetiton in it. The flow was amazing as well. |
by cory
Wow u r a pro you really made another masterpiece.u rock 5/5 |
by Roxiee An
Oh My God |
Awesome poem. I can relate to it so much. Keep up the good work!!! |
This is one of the most AMAZING |