"Or are you optimistic in everything you do?
And just wait for life to give you your cue?"

Amazing words! I loved this hun!!!! Perfect!
xoxo

P.S. The poem was kind of a dedication to you and all my friends. The last stanza was just saying like...I lost something but that helped me realize what I always had! Thanks for the comments and support babe! I really appreciate it!

Hey hun this is definitely g0od. as i was reading it i was asking mysef them questions.. the poem really makes u think. good job. keep em coming xx

+.+ It's pretty good, for doing it in 5 minutes +.+

Thanks for the entry, Gem. it was very nicely done. And had some good thoughts in it. Enjoyed!
Charisma*

Gem I think this will leave every one wondering when they read it. Good job!

Hey...ive been reading so many of your poems...
your amazing and really inspirational
...i give you so much credit babe

Good message, not ur best but still ood stuff.

lis

Rlly awesome.... check out mine plz i hav a fair few hope u like

Ahhh i love it so much! its inspiring

I like it, it isn't to bad for doing it in 5 minutes :)

Comment #4:
You did do a good job with this one. But it's so funny b/c on something that you feel isn't very good you have 14 comments on it! Lol! How do you do it?! Great job once again! 5/5 as always. :)
~Midnight Sun