Comments : I'll Be Here

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    Very great poem! I love the emotion!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    A very very well written poem, the emotion is there, you must be a lovely friend to have.
    Well done
    much love, Tara-Kay

  • 17 years ago

    by lala

    Fantastic! your feeling were made clear in this poem, it rhymed too! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Beautiful poem, your friend must be happy knowing she has you there for her.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Dacey Flame

    Take it from me, she absolutely loves this girl =)

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Aww. that was sweet. your rhyming and you rhythm was nicely done. uhhh...lets see if i can find fault...

    One little note to tell the world
    Exactly how she feels.
    Four simple lines to tell her friends
    Exactly what she means.

    I liked that, but I didn't quite get as i probably hould. i'm not super sure if it goes with your poem.

    BUT I LIKE IT ANYWAYS!

  • 17 years ago

    by StormyStar

    You writing is excellent, i love your style. keep up the good work its ahmazing..