Needless to say this poem is wonderfully written. Your style is expressive and emotional. The words come alive when you write and you help the reader interact with the text. Stellar job as usual. Keep up the good work.

I loved the idea of the poem, and it flowed very well. I also liked the way it made me feel, like Written In Blood said, its very interactive and plays with the emotions.

So greatly penned...and so sadly true...sometimes i really hate karma...lol i love the first and the last stanza the best

Neat poem

I loved the flow 5/5

Wow. Very nice. It flowed really well. & I loved the message. It was very deep & powerful. Nice wording, as well.

Beautifully penned.

Bri x