by Britney Fossey Jan 14, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Your smile so unique, |
by J Lau
Good write... short, sweet and full of love. If I may suggest... change "your eyes I can't forget" to "your eyes I cannot forget". There are a couple of minor errors... "Your the one i would miss" should be "You're the one" and "you always seem to stair" should be "seem to stare". Other then that... good write... keep writing... 5/5 |