Wow, you are a great writer!
5/5
xoxo

It waws really good but it didn't seem to flow aswell as your others but its still rocks.

Hey colby that poem was awesome! one thing though, i think you should have made the ending have a stronger feeling to it, a bit more oomph - if you catch my drift.. but anway overall i think that was such a fantastic piece of writing and i loved how i could vividly picture the scene! 5/5 great work!

p.s can u check out some of my poems? i have a new one out that no one has rated or left comments on.. its called 'This Old Man'. it would be really great if u could check it out!!

Very meaningful poem my friend, keep it up and i hope this all works out for you and your love.

Yet again, great job! Keep it up! :]

Cute cute cute poem... dont we all just feel a little comfused at sometimes, when we know the truth all along? anyways.. keep up the good work! i really liked your poem!