Wow! I loved this. I'm not exactly sure what the story is about, but you captured it beautifully, with such strong emotions. Great work:)

--steph

Ps. I noticed a few mistake:

"but they just ignore the his comment"

I think it should be either "his" or "the" Not both haha;)

and

"They tell him he can never forgiven"

I think you forgot to put a "be" in there

They tell him he can never forgiven,

This poem is about Charles manson.

I noticed you had an obsession for Bob Dylan. I did an entire course on him and the Beatles last year, I think it was the easiest A to get in University. I was in love with their writings, and when I found out there was a course on them, well, yeah, I did awesome! What would you say is your favourite Bob Dylan song?..