I have two words...my ex. that was mine and his relationship played over and over and over and thats how i really felt when i finally had left him. great work. 5/5.

No, I dont think this was bad, it was quite good, I loved the way it flowed and the rhythm it had once u read it, good job.

What are you talking about "horrible"!?!
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"Please, go. Because I do not have the strength to leave myself,
And I know...
This may be hard on me,
But now I fell,
And it's too late for excuses,
I'm tired of feeling useless,
I wish right now you would just leave...
Please, baby let me breathe".
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Loved that stanza. Especially the first line. I can relate to it so much!!! FSDFDS:F. I dunno what else to say. Lol. This was brilliant! 5/5 Take care!

Love ya,

-` Liz

I think that it's beautiful either way! Great Job!
5/5

I don't think this poem sounds mean at all, infact I know exactly how you feel. I really liked this one, great work!

x.xBrokenx.x

Actaul;y this sounds perfect, i really enjoyed it you ARE very talented. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK. one of my favs by you...

I enjoyed this I attemped to sing it. It was great.