Lost

by Lonely Little Dreamer   Jan 14, 2007


The quiet darkness encases her.
Suffocating till no breath exists.
Lonely and tired of fighting.
Lost within an unease mind.

The light grows dimmer still.
The wind flees in disgust.
Nothing touches the lost little girl,
That rests deep within.

There she will remain.
Too blind to see her way.
Invisible to the world around her.
A lost and lonely soul.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem , well written and wording was great ,sad yet gets the point across nicely, loved it

    There she will remain.
    Too blind to see her way.
    Invisible to the world around her.
    A lost and lonely soul.
    beautiful write and a pleasure to read, keep it up ,your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rocky

    I really liked this poem i could feel the emotions in it

    ps i think "unease " should be uneasy

  • 17 years ago

    by Fay

    Woooow I loved this poem, it was soo emotional that I almost cried :(, i could relate to it to so much, read mine im sure u can also relate bcoz they r similar to this one ;). But i think u should extend this poem, it was too short, good job though ;).

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