Woooow I loved this poem, it was soo emotional that I almost cried :(, i could relate to it to so much, read mine im sure u can also relate bcoz they r similar to this one ;). But i think u should extend this poem, it was too short, good job though ;).

I really liked this poem i could feel the emotions in it

ps i think "unease " should be uneasy

Excellent poem , well written and wording was great ,sad yet gets the point across nicely, loved it

There she will remain.
Too blind to see her way.
Invisible to the world around her.
A lost and lonely soul.
beautiful write and a pleasure to read, keep it up ,your friend Tracy d 5/5