Destiny Happened

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Jan 14, 2007


Without You

Alone and cold, out in the rain,
You left me here to die in this pain.
You broke up with me, 3 times in a row,
Because I just couldn't let me true feelings show.

You broke my heart, left me to cry,
Cried for 3 days after you said goodbye.
Almost killed myself, because I was without you,
I loved you even though we were through.

A month or so later, you called me again,
But I figured you just needed to talk to a friend.
So I listened to your worries, lent a hand,
Then destiny happened, you re-became my man.

At first I thought this would just be take four,
And everything would be the same as before.
But you sweet talked me, and spent time with me,
Then you said we ARE meant to be.

~*Who Cares?*~
(He Does)

yeah..not my best...but it was for a contest...:) please r/r/c ill return the favor.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    This was a good poem, although it could have been better. You need to look over it again for words that don't make sense in each line, though. For example: At first I thought this would just be take four. That just doesn't make sense to me. Anyways, good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Hi! Thanks for the rcv... ur avatar looks great :)

    This poem's really sweet... good job :D

    ~best of luck,

    Rain

  • 17 years ago

    by BehindThisSmilex

    I lovvve this poem!
    5/5