I lovvve this poem!
5/5

Hi! Thanks for the rcv... ur avatar looks great :)

This poem's really sweet... good job :D

~best of luck,

Rain

This was a good poem, although it could have been better. You need to look over it again for words that don't make sense in each line, though. For example: At first I thought this would just be take four. That just doesn't make sense to me. Anyways, good job.