You and your best friend have one great thing in common, you can both write great poetry. I really enoyed this piece and all the different ways love was described. Nice write. =] 5/5

Tammie

A great poem and very well stated, love can kill as well as give hope people dont realise this, you do hold someones life in your hands. 5/5

Wow... this is great... i really don't know what else to say but... this is friggin awesome!!! lol, seriously though, great job with this, it's one of my favorites of yours!!!! keep it up! 5/5

*Shawte*

A Great one indeed! It contains plenty of metaphors that help give it a wonderful flow! 5/5

This was purely sad. who are we without the love?
your friend is right. Love is lethal. it kills the "old you" and makes a "new you" out of you. a true Love is lethal and at the same time eternal.
good poem here.
thanks for sharing it :)
Marjan

This had great flow your friend rocks at writing lol

That was vey good keep it up love always linda

Tell your friend that his poetry is just as yours. amazing. he is clearly a talented writer. i feel that both of you are, and you both have your strengths and weaknesses. great write. 5/5

Wow james is a really good writer too! i love it!

Tell james that i love this poem and it got a 5/5 from me! he should definetly write more!