Gem this is a catchy poem. I find it is going over and over in my mind! Love it!

Dnt u luv it wen u find previous poems that uve written and look at the trasnformation. neway this poem was good. liked its structure. xx

I loved it! And I can relate! :(, not good. I loved it though! Very strong!
xoxo

WOW! Now that's a good poem! I loved the flow and power of it all. Good job!
Charisma*

This was really good! Subtle and sublime! I liked it alot. I understood perfectly what you meant to say. Sometimes a poem doesn't need very much in order to get a point across. Good job!

Great tone..excellent stuff never cease to amaze :)

lis

It has a lot of meaning and you wrote it very well. keep the good work up and easily a 5/5

-chelseaa;

ps. thank you for the comment. well ya with that poem it is about my dad i lost him when i was 6. i am glad you liked it. private message me if you want one day:) or i can give you my e-mail

WOW i loved that.i like the end the best.lol..guys are losers. ~Rissy~

I think it's good!!!
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Wow great poem its really good ill have to read more...

Wow, this is really good. i'm sure alot of people can relate. i can't not personally, cuz i'm too afraid to open up, cuz this happens all the time. but this is a really good poem. really good job!!:)

Great work.. I love all of your poems.. U have a great talent.. Keep up the good work

I love it. it reminds me of that song by JET called "look what you've done". so beautiful. 5/5. :)