by Gem Jan 14, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
You call youself my bestest friend |
by Kaila
Whoo! i like this poem its kind of edgy and i can relate to it |
by Kaila
Whoo! i like this poem its kind of edgy and i can relate to it |
by Jess
Great poem. I had so many "Best Friends" stab me in the back too. I hope you find the true one i know i have. |
by x.Athame.x
Very nice. I liked this a lot. It flowed really well, and conveyed a lot of emotion. Nice job. |
In the first four lines too many yets leave one out also avoid but it takes awy from the flow of ur poem here. |