Such a bittersweet poem, but i'm starting to look foreward to your next love poem now =) I love them!

"You make my heart flutter
My pulse starts to race.
My cheeks start to glow
I see your handsome face."

That first stanza is so beautiful and the ending is so sad, but keep your head held high cos i know for a fact you'll be with him again some day =)
5/5
*Gem*

Hey Cindy,
This was very well written like all of your poems they come from your kind, loving heart, I really enjoyed reading this one, keep up the brilliant work,
Much love, Your friend Tara-Kay

Cindy, I really think this poem is written so well. It has a sweet touch to it....
GOOD JOB =)

I dont even have to say it, this is another very good poem cindy, like all your poems, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Brought me to tears. Horrible event, but so well written. great job. 5/5

Good imagery in this one. A heartfelt dream with clouds of emotion. Nice job.

Woah this is really good it explains so much i know exactly what ur talking about good work

Hmm I know that feeling

Thats how i feel about this guy named andy he might not be the cutest or smartest guy arouned but hes nice and i love him and thats wat its all about

This is very cute :) makes me happy ^^

Aww.. this is soo sad.. i just read your profile.. im soo sorryy about your husband.. thats horribe.. god bless you.. now i know why all your poems are so heartfelt

This was so very sweet yet so very sad.
The last stanza was truly excellent.
Wonderful work.

It's lovely that you can still hold on to the memories and the feelings, and although it is hard to wake up remembering it's not real, you just have to hold on to what was real. excellent poem xxx