by Danny Jan 14, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Looking up at the ceiling wondering why what i did/said was wrong ...you said that i don\'t trust you..but only if you knew how i felt about you i .. i just asked you one question to make sure that what we had when we first met was still there and that you cared for me the way i cared for you ...... and just for this one question its all over all we worked for is gone ... all i ask from you is forgiveness and that you give me another chance |
by Michelle18
I really like this poem..its so sad and really emotional..i can relate to it.. good job! |
by lizzle
I no wat u mean!!dis is sucha great poem tho!!!great work! |
by Espoirfailed
That is really emotional n u have expressed urself well, therefore u have written a gd poem. i started wrtitin poems a few months ago n im now hooked u improve so much with practice so keep it up |
by Marjan
That is so sad Danny. yeah, I know what you mean. I myself feel much better after expressing myself through written words. I hope you feel better soon. |