This poem is really good, but never worry about rhyming because sometimes your rhyming seems contrived but the message and wording of your poem is awesome. keep up the good work! :)

~jas~

I thought this was a really good poem! excellent job! 5/5

Yeah, it was okay.
The flow of the lines was quite rocky, but it was a good poem.
love Tara-Kay

Short, but to the point. Good Job. The flow was a little rocky here and there, but the structure was good. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Beautiful and very sorrowful. You have such a beautiful heart. Once again, a wonderful piece of work!

~jas~

Oh My Gosh.
It brought back.. memories.
Eh.
I loved it.
I felt the emotion. :]
Another great poem, sweetie.
Keep it up.

This was so sad, yet such a pleasure to read.
I could sense pain behind the words.
This was wonderfully written.

Hey beautiful poem! Very good poem! your very talented! keep it up!
love Mel

Oh itz so sad but its good i can relate! 5/5

This was short but it got the point across keep it up

Oh my Laura, so sad... 5/5 though, loved it!!!

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