This poem sings. laura
will love this one too. hey you are both from the uk why don't hook up, lol
check out my < only when im sleeping> i think you'll like it its on the same order as this.

Four years by nicole

I do like ur sence of humor
i should write dark love poem
keep them coming i can take it
i sick laura on you

Yo check the poem by jamica called
my days are full with gloom

I like the way this moves along, and the way you've used some pretty cliched rhyming without it sounding trite. But I question the repetition of "dream" in the last stanza. It seems to me you were struggling to bring the poem to a conclusion.

Hey AI. It was an awesome poem. It expressed many things I believe too, and how life REALLY is...u know, not like the life we actually dream about.I really enjoyed it though, good job. By the way, I was wondering if u remember me by chance? We used to chat a lot in the, well, chat room! lol.U know, when like joker and lorna used to be there. It was a couple years ago...Well, i remember u, its nice to see some of the people from b4 again...Well just wanted to say hi and c how u were doing..once again, great job and i will check out some other of your poems too..Take care...