by Michelle18 Jan 14, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
My feelings never show, |
by Annabel
I can relate to this poem. I think it kind of loses the rhythm at the end a bit though. I'm not sure, all in all it works well though, I think your poems are great! |
This is a good poem that is easily related to. I liked it, simple but nice. The rhyming is good too. =) |
by Kaila
This is a great poem that i can definitly relate to it was cute i loved it! |
by Tara Kay
I can relate to every word of this. |
by debbylyn
Very sincere and well expressed! Keep on writing! |