Great poem! i've gone through this too. i love all your poems, i can totally relate to them! 5/5!!

*Shawte*

You expressed yourself very well! I liked this poem! However some of the lines were quite long which threw off the rhyming a little, perhaps you could cut the lines in half.
Overall, great job! =)
5/5

I wrote something really similar to my bF a while back. thx for rrc my poem. loved yours keep it up 5.5

That poem was well expressed. i know how you feel as i'm also afraid to let my true feelings show. when i smile but inside my mind my soul is breaking into peaces. ( i know it is different from the poem but anyway)

it also had a good rhyme scheme
good work

Very sincere and well expressed! Keep on writing!

I can relate to every word of this.
Its such an awesome poem, i enjoyed this so much.
well done, a very good piece
love, Tara-Kay
xxxxxx

This is a great poem that i can definitly relate to it was cute i loved it!

This is a good poem that is easily related to. I liked it, simple but nice. The rhyming is good too. =)
~ Lainey

I can relate to this poem. I think it kind of loses the rhythm at the end a bit though. I'm not sure, all in all it works well though, I think your poems are great!
:) x