This was a beautiful poem. I hope he really does mean it this time. Though in my experience, it never worked. The guy ended up being the same as he was, and I ended up with a broken heart. I hope you don't have to go through that as I did.

In your poem, though, there are a few words missing and a few words that don't make sense. Just thought I'd point that out. Awesome poem!

I can really relate to this poem. i think we have to go through the bad times to make us see how fantastic the good times can be and that we don't take our friends and family for granted.

Ashleigh

It was so cool .. i really love it .. and i'm going into this right now :D

keep writting ur good