Awwwww. This was so beautiful and romantic, it almost made me cry. I've read a few poems that talked about holding memories in time, but this was alot more original than those I've read. Indeed, it captured my heart.

I only saw a single thing that caught my mind as criticism. The last verse of the last stanza didn't rhyme like the rest had.

But, this is one of my favorite love poems! Great work!

Great write... I can definitely relate to this... I had almost started a relationship with the one I love... but never did... I still hold onto that weekend we spent together... your poem took the words right out of my mind. Great write. 5/5