Hey Steph this was nice! :) I really honestly did like it and the whole idea of what it must like to have someone inside you, yet that person is somewhat of a mystery. It is a really hopeful and happy poem and for girls at least, it makes us feel good about our future and having kids. Haha but I'm many years from that! Keep up the good work. There is an honesty in your poems that seems to just come from the heart.

Keep it up!

Astryd

Nice poem, great flow nice rhyme, very easy to understand, I liked it.

Aww cute poem! But in my opinion I think when a baby is concieved that baby is already someone. Good poem though. And If I didn't thank you already thank you for your comment on mine I really appreciated it.

Thanks for your comment on "Inner Beauty" this was a good poem.

I wouldn't usually think of an unborn baby as "nobody". I can relate to this poem though. I really enjoyed the read. There was a great flow to it.

marcella