by iDeePanda Jan 14, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
While searching for the real essence of life, |
by Nawa
Sweet !! a lovely well written poem. Good job. |
by withlove
Hey not to sound creepy but... |
by Letty
I thought decided to give you a five for effort. lol |
by Letty
I'll admit that there are a few loose ends to this poem. But I believe it deserves more then the rating it got. The flow was kind of rocky because there are a few words and stanzas that you should work on. Other then that I think that it had emotion and imegery. I give it a 4/5. |