I'll admit that there are a few loose ends to this poem. But I believe it deserves more then the rating it got. The flow was kind of rocky because there are a few words and stanzas that you should work on. Other then that I think that it had emotion and imegery. I give it a 4/5.

I thought decided to give you a five for effort. lol

Hey not to sound creepy but...
im not sure if u even come on anymore but i saw u in tawnis favorite authors and knew who u were so i thought id read some of your stuff
this is a good poem a lot of feeling and i like hte way its structured
gud job =)

Sweet !! a lovely well written poem. Good job.