Wow! I am amazed! This is really good
I mean it is really really good! That's really cool that it is a song too! It's good that you are going to take the chance! I really hope that it works out for you! It's cool that we can relate with eachother, I like that when I read poems. I can relate to this one too. Great job!!!! 5/5

~Kat~

I bet it's a good song, it has so much potential for different tunes and stuff.
I liked this poem, it held a lot of meaning for me and probably many others between the lines.
5/5
*Gem*

This is saweet! nice work on it. 5/5

This is really good. I no what you mean when you find out summin about the one if you will that you didn't wanna no and it jus ruins your life. great poem 5/5.
~Kelsey~

Wow that must be one amazing song : )
one suggestion i would change

and i dont care what you do
cuz im through

to

and i dont care what you do
cuz im through with you

just a suggestion!
great job on the poem a deffinate 5/5

Wonderfull poem and thank youh for the comment.
very good 5/5