Great write... mysterious... emotional... heart felt. Your choice for the title hook the reader right away... wondering why you will be there but goodbye. It's a love poem... yet it's sad... maybe that is what true love is... if you love someone... you have to let them go. Great write. 5/5

I loved this poem, it really touched me and its so real, a wonderful read. Take care, 5/5

Very nice flow, lots of emotion, all in all it is very good. good job keep writing.

P.S. thanks for the comment and the vote i appreciate an honest opinion from some one who may not have the same believes as me.

AWWW... i loved it it was a very nice poem. the flow was great i loved it.
5/5 alwyas
Kate

I loved reading this poem, the emotion and phrasing was fantastic :) It caught me up and carried me right along with it all the way to the end, I love it when a poem does that lol Wonderful job and 5/5

~*Rhea*~

Beautiful poem...i really enjoyed it...keep up the good work!!!5/5