I like it:) This was definately your best so far. It was very well written, and you captured a very controversial topic very well. Great work darling:)

--Steph

This was really good i liked it a lot 5/5 keep it up
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Wow. I liked how you wrote this. 5/5

This was a great piece. So true, and the fact that it is true is honestly heart breaking. I can't even pick a favorite stanza or couplet, it was just too good to pick it apart. Absolutely extraordinary job on this piece. *5/5

This was an ok poem, the repetitive lines were a bit too much, but it was still an enjoyable poem.

Good story of fate, honestly i really like it

Wow this poem was amazing, it was written excelently i love the emotion in it 5/5