by WitherBlisterBurnandPeel Jan 15, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
The bails of hay won't be moved |
by Courtney
I love your rhyming pattern and how it doesn't compensate the meaning. I especially like your last two stanzas! |
by Fan Angeleo
First let me say I love your poem. Second I like the way you spaced, keep on woking hard. |