5/5 I really liked it..
Its as if u toke my words from me.

This is so good. you rhymed each verse so well. and the flow is really great.
i love this last verse
"My heart is screaming one thing
My mind is thinking absolutely not
I feel like I'm a balancing act
At which is being shot
I'm trying to hold it all together
And dodge the bullets flying 'round
And while I feel like screaming
I can never make a sound"
so well written and what a great way to describe those feelings...
good work =)

p.s. thank you so much for the comment on my poem...it meant alot =)

I loved it!! I thought it was very good that it was pure emotion! Don't worry it's brillent!