This poem takes us from romance to reality
in a unique style

I am glad to read such a great poem by my favorite writer in the world. Your words gives me smile, tears, and comfort.
this one was the best one so far

I do not agree with this poem at all,
reasons,
1, you praise yourself by using "lost bright destiny,
2, you are saying your all 54 poems were lie and meaningless.

I hope you agree with my points?

Hey this is really good, thanks for your comment on my poem :)

One of the better poems ive read of yours since the luckiest guy series, but this one is a really good poem goran, loved the flow, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Wow! gosh..if this is true and she read this poem im sure she would see how much you loved her..its so sad..but im glad you finally got over someone that doesnt love you..great job!

"For the heart beats to don't stop." should be changed to "For the heart beats not to stop." The flow and the structure were both good. The meaning and emotion within was outstanding, I am sure a lot can relate. Amazing write.

Peace, Joe

Ahh bad? don't use bad. =[[ it isn't a word you use. icky icky word. 3 letter word! -spits on 'bad-... lol. Edit that. Make it Better. =]

Other than that it was a little iffy at some points with the rhyming because it seemed like it had a rhyme scheme at some points but at others seemed. like 'does it.. if it is suppossed to its way forced' or something. i would reread it to find those little points. =]

But i really did love it. the metaphors and similes were great. and it flowed from beggining to end very well. the story was complete, but didnt shove it in my face. Great Job. =]

xx3Lauren

Beautifully written and so very, very sad! Loved it. Nothing I could see needs changing. Good job!

That was quite a decent poem. but what i really loved about it was the meaning behind the words. i know just how you felt i fell in love with a whor-e. and i wanted no other. but she just kept on throwing my love away as if it meant nothing. she thought that no matter what she did i'd still take her back. eventually i managed to break away but it wasn't easy.
i especially loved the last 2 stanzas they spoke to my soul
good work the only complaint i have is the use of the word bad. it just isn\\\'t powerful enough for the rest of the poem/
rocky

This poem is amazing!!! it flows really well! i can totally relate to every word... almost... i think... no seriously, great job!!! 5/5!!!

*Shawte*

I love ur style and such a wonderful tone. very touching, well done.
lissa

Oh i liked it sooo much i could really relate to it!!! it was really good 5/5

Thank you so much for your effort here...well-delivered and deeply moving.....
great job, 5/5

Wow...my eyes got wet reading this too...well done...5/5 goran bahoot aacha hai :)

Great poem, I really like it:D
I liked the flow:D

I like this and feel i can relate . i love the way you express your emotions . you made me feel every word and i really understood ... thanks for the good poem

That was a really great poem, as always from a great poet, great job.

Wow...You must really be angry at this one person. Sounds like she doesn't appreciate these wonderful poems you write. This is a great poem! Keep up the great work God Bless 5/5

Ooo yea....another awsome poem by u/..a 5/5 for me oo how can ppl b so selfish? hmm idk...