That poem wasnt to bad but i dont see how the second stanza fits in with the other 2.
rocky

I really liked this.
I thought it was sweet, it made me smile.
I enjoyed the imagery and I thought the wording used was good.

I really liked your poem and the words were well placed and well put. I look forward to reading more of your works this year, both new ones and ones you already have listed on the site… Keep up the good writes.