Comments : I Can't get enough of You

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz Lawson

    Great way to relate the two --- drugs and love

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is really good I love the way you compare love to addiction. Great Job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Catastrophe

    I love this && i know exactly what you mean.
    great job! 5/5 =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Awesome comparison, and I understood it completely. Nice flow and overall great poem in itself.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    This poem was so amazing to me. hence why you placed:) i just loved your use of drugs as an addiction. it really worked well! 10/5 if that were somehow possible lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Once again, the only thing i can really suggest is try to keep the stanza's the same length and rhythm, but the poem still holds up well.

    "I'm a girl with an addiction,
    I'm going crazy with obsession.
    I'm stuck on you, you are my life.
    I just can't get enough of you."

    The ending stanza was good way of summing it all up and it really got the point of how far the addiction goes.
    On a personal note, i can really relate to this poem, so i think it's excellent =)
    5/5
    *Gem*

    (Comment Three and amazing work!)

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    I can relate to this I think most people can hey girl that last stanza rocks it ties every thing together perfect ending to an excellent poem