by Liz Lawson
Great way to relate the two --- drugs and love |
by Cindy
This is really good I love the way you compare love to addiction. Great Job! |
I love this && i know exactly what you mean. |
by Chelsey
Awesome comparison, and I understood it completely. Nice flow and overall great poem in itself. |
This poem was so amazing to me. hence why you placed:) i just loved your use of drugs as an addiction. it really worked well! 10/5 if that were somehow possible lol |
by Gem
Once again, the only thing i can really suggest is try to keep the stanza's the same length and rhythm, but the poem still holds up well. |
I can relate to this I think most people can hey girl that last stanza rocks it ties every thing together perfect ending to an excellent poem |