A Night Under the Stars

by miipenguiinsocksrock   Jan 15, 2007


You holding me. me holding you
that night, i won't ever forget
the best times i've ever had
the night we spent under the stars

you kissed me just like i dreamed
you would
only you did it better
afterwards i felt like an angel
because you took my breath away

you made my knees weaken
my body shiver with your words
your hands, and just the though of you being there
the best thing i've ever experienced

a night under the stars
the best night of my life
if only we could do it again real soon
that would be the only thing i'm wishing for

a night under the stars
just reminiscing back to the way your body smelled
it makes me want to break out in tears
because it was so remarkable

you swept me off my feet to soon
for me to realize that you could walk out of my life whenever
all the bad things doesn't matter anymore because
you showed me the real side of heaven
that night under the stars

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dan

    Love the poem keep writin

  • 17 years ago

    by Mike Forsythe

    WOw, good job... i really like this,...
    it goes together really good, and easy to understand...gj
    comment some of my peoms//...

  • 17 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    This is so beautiful and touching. such a great image- a night under the stars. reminded me of a mariah carey song i used to listen to. great poem x

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Very wel done dear it really shows real feelings..good job5/5

    God bless u

  • 17 years ago

    by SADADDY

    That was a wonderful write that shows you are truly writing from the heart. Great job!

    sadaddy

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