"Thoughts of you posses me
Your face is all I see
Need to look into your eyes
Before I can be free"

That opening stanza was beautiful and the rest of the poem followed suit. You have come so far with your love poems, they are amazingly good!
I'm proud =)
5/5
*Gem*

This is a great poem cindy, i can feel the sorrow in it, loved the flow, perfect write, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

Looks like you've been busy since last night...lol....check my new one too! Good write again.

Well done, another awesome write.
Your poems are a pleasure to read.
xxxxx
love, your friend, Tara-Kay

This is so beautiful, sweet, heartfelt and sad. The rhyme and rhythm are good. Wonderful job!

Omg that brought tears to my eyes! i have never had a poem do that!!! great job!

Wonderful, beautiful, sincere poem....
You just can't fail in what you write...

A friend along the way

Another great one.. wow!!! simple rhymes but still the emotions come out strong.. i love that in a poem..i write the same way.. hehe :) great job!

Awe,
Thats so sad.
Its VERY well written
Take care.
Jana.

Awe,
Thats so sad.
Its VERY well written
Take care.
Jana.

This was so sad and heartfelt, and a pleasure to read.
The first stanza had me hooked and the last stanza was such a perfect ending.

I liked this one, very moving and also a very strong title it stands out xxxx