I really liked this poem. i think that the imagery was wonderful, however, i would have loved it if you would have added a little bit more. but even without extra words, it's great! 5/5

Hey Natalie,

There are two things I would like to say about the poems you are writing.

I like the images you try to create with your poems. This is very good..

The second thing I would like to ask for you is to try and make a bit longer sentences :). It will make the poem look different. I am curious to your next poem.

~Darkbreath~