(*tearing up*) That was so tragic. Hell yeah it was hard to write! I mean in order to write something you need to visualize it. But your word choice was flawless...it was like you'd been there yourself girl! So powerful and moving. Amazing job, Gem...amazing. Definately deserving a 5/5!!!
~Midnight Sun

Omg.. That was simply amazing, Very powerful! I like the imagery created in this poem! The opening stanza was really good! and the ending was perfect. 5/5!

Excellent story/poem...I can visualize what you are saying...good work....5/5 check out my latest poem "gifts of sorrow" "arabian sands"

Omgah this poem was like no other REALLY great!! and sad but great words and just wow great everything loveddddd ^^

Noelle

Wow! serious chills! it makes me so angry! it was very well written and so descriptive i could visualise everything. There are some really sick people in this world! well done on writing this. such a sad piece.

Amazing writing skills. difficult to read without the constant cringe. 5/5

Im so so so so sry bout what happen i feel your pain

Omg thats sooo sad, I hate people who do things like this... great poem though

This brought tears to my eyes. I've been through this before, not the same storyline. But, you know.
This isn't something anyone should have to go through.
I'm sure it was incredibly hard to write.
5/5
Take care.

Wow! this was really gooood! no joke oh man i felt like i just read a book that no one else knows about. gem honey u are an amazing writter, ur poems are long and i dont reall like long poems at all! but your poems i will read becasue they keep me in your world.

when you read this comment i hope i put a big smile on your face to the point you chuckle. to be even more honest by reading it i go a sudden chill in my heart just because... i dont kno y but things like that i always feel bad of.

please explain to me y write a novel poem like this? i hope it doesnt apply to you hun.
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wow! HOW LONG HAVE YOU BEEN WRITING AGAIN, CAUSE I WOULD SO LIKE TO BE YOU. =]

bye gurl i love you and your work... i feel marcus is like the other half of you the one who makes you who u r no matter what...

and i really hope you two make your love last till the day you guys die.. not to mention leaving you children to walk the earth for you with you beauty and good talent of writting. ( i really hope that came out just about right)

i have to find time to read ur work so expect more from me.!

100/100

The poem is amazing! the story was very hard for me to read it made me cry =(, no girl or women should be treated this way
5/5

You are very talented, I haven't wrote poems in a while, my life kinda caught up to me. Poems are another way for people to escape the reality they live in, with your poems I can feel the good and bad. I think you are an amazing writer and hope you continue to write more and more poems.

Sincerely, the Plastic Butterfly.