Wow flows very fast i lyk it short and sweet the emotion ran through well if ya eva need 2 tlk email me x x x plz could u comment on some of myn if u get some tym x x x

Oh wow, this is so sad. the words were wonderful and everything flowed well. i loved everything about it, the ending made me worry about your character though and if she would even survive for the next day. 5/5

This poem is so full. . .Loads of emotions packed into a short length of writing. . .
I loved it and the rhyming was natural. . .

Well done, keep stong,
Laura
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