by Gem Jan 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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The love I have will never end |
by Kaila
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Wow u make even a short poem filled with so many good words! how do u do it? |
by Katlyn
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I love it... then again i love most your poems... I dont really know what to say to this but its really good. Great Job! |
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Um.. i'd say its about a 4/5 but ofcourse i voted 5 anyway i always do.. its a cute poem with a nice flow.. but the words you chose are all just very simple and elemental.. it seems like the words you chose were simply to fit the rhyme |
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Um.. i'd say its about a 4/5 but ofcourse i voted 5 anyway i always do.. its a cute poem with a nice flow.. but the words you chose are all just very simple and elemental.. it seems like the words you chose were simply to fit the rhyme |
by Midnight Sun
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