I like how you have explained this.

very lovely poem.
ashleigh x x

I loved it! wow, you have a very unique style of writing, and this type of poetry seems hard to do, but you definitaly nailed it! your on my favs gurl, keep writing darling, ill keep checking in on your poems, cant get enough of the stuff!

Aww I loved it Gem! You are the most amazing writer I have ever seen! I loved it! I'm soo happy you found the love of your life!
xoxo

Hey darl good jo. love reading different styles of writing. xx

Gem,
I am lost with the different kinds of poems there are so many. This is beautiful like all that flow from your pen. Great job! Cindy

Great style, love it. nuff said.

lis

Comment #7:

This was very simple but very powerful too. You are very good at love poems...I guess it helps to be in love, right? lol....great job and congrats again on winning! :)
~Midnight Sun

Um.. i'd say its about a 4/5 but ofcourse i voted 5 anyway i always do.. its a cute poem with a nice flow.. but the words you chose are all just very simple and elemental.. it seems like the words you chose were simply to fit the rhyme

Um.. i'd say its about a 4/5 but ofcourse i voted 5 anyway i always do.. its a cute poem with a nice flow.. but the words you chose are all just very simple and elemental.. it seems like the words you chose were simply to fit the rhyme

I love it... then again i love most your poems... I dont really know what to say to this but its really good. Great Job!

5/5

Wow u make even a short poem filled with so many good words! how do u do it?