Hey i liked it a lot! lol it was very nice. you have a mind anda heart of a true poet, keep up the good work!

Haha, this was a funny poem n did deserve to go in this section! made me laugh out loud

Oh i loved this poem, reminded me of a few nights out i've had lmao
Great flow to it and the rhyming was great! Keep it up gem i'm loving your work :]
5/5

LMAO! That is soo funny Gem! That's good, I needed a little humor! I loved this poem! Sooooo good! SO FUNNY!
xoxo

P.S. I'd love to hear the break up poems. Thanks!

+.+ It could've gone in sad poems, but I think you did the right thing, cuz I thought it was funny. Another good one from you +.+

Haha i really liked it! it was funny, haha i hate it when boys are like that... haha good job!

Gem, Very funny. I loved the back and forth responses. Excellent! Take Care Cindy

Lol good job

Sounds like some of my nights at the bar.

Hey, i love this! A lot of perople can easily relate!

Wow SO POWERFULL loved it all esp. the ending.wowur so talentd.

keep it up

lis

One of ur best..wow

Comment #6:

Yeah...kinda hard to choose a category...if only they had one for girl power! Lol! You did really good and it was very easy to follow...great job!
~Midnight Sun

Aw Gem i love your work, your such a talented writer, i could almost relate to this but i really don't remember what happened that night :)
xx court

Wow.. all your poems have really amazing flow.. cute poem.. not my fav but its still good

Thats cute

IT WAS FUNNY AND TRUE I KNOW WHAT BEER AND WEED DOES TO A PERSON, IT'S FUNNY TO WATCH DRUNK AND HIGH PEOPLE! I LOVED THE POEM!

Lol, nice!

Hehe this is so cool i love it

YEPP im pretty sure that was the best i've seen in a long time

-and mind you it was pretty funny as well. GOOD JOB