You go! you don't need this person, you have expressed this so clearly in this poem, well done

This one is ok. The reason I comment is cause I'm feeling the exact same thing about a friend (or ex-friend) right now. That being said, I feel there is more that can be said about this situation, but maybe that's just me.

I like the way this turned out, i think you should add more on it though when you have the time =D