Awwwwwwwww really good...kick the girls ass if she doesnt treat him right.. lol.. you should really read this 2 bobby.

I can relate to how you feel

good poem

Hey curry it's britt if u want 2 read some of my poems just serch Britany and u will find some i wrote i just joined last night sooooooo i have written 3 poems and 3 quotes sooooooo i wish u luck finding my poems bye bye ttyl

Hey curry it's britt 1 more thing wut if the girl treats him write but he does not treat her write cuz that has happened 2 me and the guy and i no longer talk i did nothing 4 him 2 make that choice it was all hes own he is missin somethin speacial because i am the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

This was beautiful...reminded me a little of my 'The Luckiest Girl' poem.
The depth in this piece is overwhelming.
I thought if flowed well and I liked the rhyme scheme.