OoOo! I haven't seen a good vampire poem in ages! This is great!
The flow was almost fluid like and just seemed effortless. You did an excellent job on this!

"Making another, just like me,
Changing them into a biter,
Making another to go with me,
On a blood-spree all nighter."

My fave stanza =)
5/5
*Gem*

This is real good LOVELY descriptions, so... wonderfly written, i love all the stanzas each wiht their own TASTE to them...
-Marina.

You are such I good writer...I found myself looked through the eyes of the vampire. Keep up the good work!!! *5/5*

Alyson

Oh my gosh! This is totally awesome! ^^ Vamps rule! I love tis poem! Best one yet!