Comments : Together we are a lighter

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very good job! You have alot of talent. Keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Ah yes -young love!!! I really liked your poem and the words were well placed and well put. I look forward to reading more of your works this year, both new ones and ones you already have listed on the site… Keep up the good writes.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kitty

    This is an awesome poem,
    keep up your good writing
    Gina (//_^)