Kinda scary, but very well-written! I like it! I like the flow and the rhyming scheme! I also like the imagery as well! Very well done!
5/5

Wow that was really nice 5/5 keep it up.

Woah. This was intense. I like the concept of it. Don't really know what to say about it though. Very good write.

-` Liz

This poem is amazing!!! i absolutely love it... i really like the first two lines and the last ones, those r the ones that really got to me! great job!! 5/5!!

Forever*Yours

Wow.... intense. but well written. good job. and thank you for the comments :)

Yet again, great work

Oo that gave me goosebumps! a good write, i liked it, try using more complicated and descriptive vocab to really give the poem that extra edge... great job

That was brilliant!
It was something that captured me, and made me want to read more, you are very talented.
This was pretty spooky because of the context, it flowed very well and i loved it!
love Tara-Kay
xxxxx

Wow you are a talented writter. Keep up the amazing work. The flow was good. The structure needs work however, perhaps breaking it into stanzas would help. Other than that amazing write.

Peace, Joe

Wow it's kinda kool,keep it up honey
love ya and thank ya 5/5

The devil in the wrong place. wow what a line . i use that line foever
i always tell my wife im the devil in her. im the one that brings out the evil
in. good poem brought alot of feelings out

Wow
its kinda scary
i wonder hw u can come up wit it all
i guess the most scary part is
tht pple actually feel tht way
willing 2 kill 4 any lil thing

The sadness pours from this poem. Very well done. Take Care Cindy

I really liked it I don't know why but I did.

Michelle, guess who this is!!! i'll give u a hint ur baby cuzzin! srry i'm bored. i kno u dont like this poem, but i love it!!!!

Very interesting. At first I thought its flow isn't good, but in the second reading, I liked it very much. The repetition of the words :"devil in the wrong place' is great, very effective, and the rhyming is good, it don't seem forced.
5/5

Very interesting I love the imagery very fantastic. Your lines flowed very well. Great piece, thanks for sharing.

I like this. It's quite original and different from other sad poems i've read on this site. But my favorite lines of all time is, "You're not an angel fallen from grace,
You're just a devil in the wrong place."
Beautifully written ^^^
5/5
~ Lainey

Ur good like this!!
i love ur poetry^^
wanna write dark poems also..