Love

by Holly Hansen   Mar 31, 2004


Love sucks
help us
i hate love
it hurts

if you believe
you are getting yourself in trouble
don't believe in love

i get hurt
and i cry
over that one guy

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I can understand where you're coming from. There are a few things that need to be fixed;

    This poem is a little to short. The lines are also a little to short.

    If you to make these changes I think that this poem would be a lot better.
    Keep up the good work. 4/5